Review: The Birth of an Anticipation

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Saphrym is holding a contest. To enter, you have to review one his blog entries. Deadline: February 27th, a very important day for Mike.

I picked: The Birth of an Anticipation. It’s a very emotional poem for me. I chose it as my entry because I’ve always had this feeling that his blog mainly evolves of him being a father. Everyone has very few happiest moments in life and this entry tells you the author’s feelings about his child. I can feel his total amazement through the words. I’m not a dad, obviously, but I felt that his initial instincts were all about protecting the child and then evolved into an awesome love.

Before the clock turned 7:01,
Searching for that little one,
My eyes find Nicole
Playing in the sun,
Mind and soul,
My little one.

I believe that her daughter, Nicole, gave him more purpose in life than he ever had.

I just keep this short and simple.

 

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